I started writing a story about a normal day, then changed one detail

I wrote a scene about a guy making coffee in his kitchen. It was boring. Then I changed it so the coffee machine was a gift from his ex-wife, who he still thinks about. That one detail changed the whole feeling of the scene in about ten minutes of editing. It made the character's quiet morning feel sad instead of just routine. Has anyone else had a small change like that completely flip a scene?

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margaret9912d ago

That old blue mug in my story became his dead brother's favorite.

the_gray12d ago

That line about the mug becoming his favorite feels off to me. Objects don't get meaning until after the person is gone, margaret99. The memory is what makes it special, not the other way around.