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Vent: my beta reader in Phoenix said my fight scene read like a DMV waiting room, and she was right
She told me my 1,200 word sword fight had more standing around than swinging, so I rewrote the whole thing with 6 inch movements and now I want to know if anyone else had a reader call out something that obvious?
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morgan32928d ago
Your beta reader was wrong, standing around builds tension.
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