A client told me my estimates were too vague and it forced me to get specific

I used to write agency proposals like "we'll handle your SEO for $1500 a month" and just leave it at that. Real vague, real broad. Then a client in Austin asked me point blank what exactly they were getting for that money, and I had nothing good to say. They picked another agency that itemized everything down to the backlink count. So I went back and broke my process into phases: 8 hours of keyword research, 5 new blog posts, 3 technical audits a quarter. Now every proposal has a clear breakdown and my close rate went up 40% after I made that shift. Has anyone else had a client call them out on something that forced a real change in how you pitch?

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the_emma16d ago

You said they picked another agency that itemized everything down to the backlink count." Did you ever figure out exactly which line items made the biggest difference with that losing client, or was it more about just showing you had a process at all? Like, was it the blog post count or the technical audits that sealed the deal for the other shop?

samw4715d ago

Wait they actually itemized by backlink count? @the_emma I mean that's wild, usually clients just want to know you've got a plan not that you're counting individual links like pennies.