Makes sense to me, @christopher_wilson, a second set of eyes always helps.

Wait, you were scared of the water but ate street food?

Is it really that big of a deal though? People read books before phones existed all the time. It just sounds like a normal afternoon to me.

Switched to anthracite and it burns way cleaner, no more smoke issues.

Honestly, that's just your art ghost telling you the composition was weak. Mine usually just smudges the charcoal when it's unhappy. A full page reset is next-level critique.